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 Midna's Hero's Gallery of Wonders 
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Post Midna's Hero's Gallery of Wonders
Fan Fictions
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Midna - The Missing Link



Hand Art
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Midna Drawing 1


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Midna Drawing 2


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Crossing the Gerudo Desert


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Twilit Prince 1


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Twilit Prince 2


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Fatherly Advice


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Hyrules Guard-Dog


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Home Again


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3.5 hours for WMB


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Kid of the Moon



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Midnas Bday Present


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Stock Twilight Background



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Mon Aug 25, 2008 11:10 pm
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Post Re: I need some feedback.
It could use work, but I encourage you to continue writing.

The first thing I notice is that it could use some formatting instead of just posting the whole thing as one large paragraph. Usually writers will begin a new paragraph when a new person speaks. Also maybe try to pay close attention to your grammar and avoid run-on sentences. All of this makes it much easier to read, and I wouldn't want little stuff like that to distract from what could potentially end up being a very good fic.

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Post Re: I need some feedback.
centralservices wrote:
It could use work, but I encourage you to continue writing.

The first thing I notice is that it could use some formatting instead of just posting the whole thing as one large paragraph. Usually writers will begin a new paragraph when a new person speaks. Also maybe try to pay close attention to your grammar and avoid run-on sentences. All of this makes it much easier to read, and I wouldn't want little stuff like that to distract from what could potentially end up being a very good fic.


thanks for the suggestion, I usually try to use correct grammar if I'm writing a story or fan fic, but I still need more feedback to know what I'm lacking. which is mainly why I posted it here for feedback posting.php?mode=quote&f=5&p=10203#(also this site has cool smilies)http://wantmidnaback.com/forum/posting.php?mode=quote&f=5&p=10203# :)

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Post Got Wallpaper?
Well I do, this took me over 90 minutes and it's not at it's peak of perfection.

http://orphanlugia0013.deviantart.com/a ... d-95825048

I'd appreciate comments critique and questions ^_^

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Post And Yet another of the fan's artwork.
http://orphanlugia0013.deviantart.com/a ... r-85122224

My gosh I hated the fused shadow, btw this is my first ever fan work of her.

Critique, comments, and questions are highly welcomed. ^_^

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Awesome, so simple, yet to great. If you don't mind me saying so however, you are right, "not at it's peak of perfection."


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:o That looks almost exactly how I'd drawl it. I did one with the same level of detail. (I have yet to post it, still need it scanned)


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I can't see why you'd hate the fused shadow, it looks amazing in my opinion. Definitely a good drawing, thanks for sharing.

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It's a little busy for my tastes, but it is good nonetheless. Some of the images you have on there are great.

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Post Re: Got Wallpaper?
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Awesome, so simple, yet to great. If you don't mind me saying so however, you are right, "not at it's peak of perfection."


Thanks so much ^_^ this is my first attempt at a LoZ wallpaper so I said hey why not focus on the character I love most, and we all know who that is :love:

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It's a little busy for my tastes, but it is good nonetheless. Some of the images you have on there are great.


I do think it's better than the one of all the different Links I did the day after though, but thanks and what do you mean by busy? :?

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