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 Pointless mini Midna story. 
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Post Re: Pointless mini Midna story.
Nice. It's interesting to see the MidZant thing shown, even if only as a memory. I have no idea where it came from, but it's still cool. You've also managed to pack quite a bit of emotion int a few paragraphs. Well done. Sometimes the pointless, short ones are the sweet ones.

As a brief criticism, you did span a lot of sudden emotions without buildup, and as a result it was fast and, well, short. Try not to be so jumpy. But it's still a great story.


Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:57 pm
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Post Re: Pointless mini Midna story.
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Wow, someone actually found this. Thanks. :D

You didn't think I'd eagerly read this?
That was... almost devastating. Makes me feel really sorry for her. I think I might feel a tear... well done.

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Oh... well, glad I saw it eventually then. Didn't realize...

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I'm glad I found it, too. If I hadn't been so enveloped in my business, I would've had a stronger reaction. In fact, now I think I can... *Goes back and reads it*...

Go away, I need some privacy"sniffs and brushes her face angrily*


Fri Jan 04, 2013 6:20 am
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