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 The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess - The Return 
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Post The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess - The Return
I've been writing a Twilight Princess Fanfiction - a sequel to the game. I didn't think it was that good, so I hadn't posted it up here yet... But after getting myself 'favorite-author'ed for it earlier today, I tought I should post it up here so you guys can read it too.
I wasn't sure whether you'd want me to post it on the actual forum or not, so here's the link:
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It's not a great start, but people commenting and reviewing the later chapters are saying it's really good :D

Also, for the next chapters, if anyone wants to read tham, should I post them onto the forum or simply post saying 'Next Chapter's up'?

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I'll definitely check this out. Feel free to post future chapters in this thread, as I am incredibly lazy. :lol:

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Post Re: The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess - The Return
UPDATE:
Chapter 15 and 16 have been put up today, but I won't bother posting them here as I don't think anyone has read it yet (or read far enough).

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Post Re: The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess - The Return
So far, I'm pretty impressed by this. The majority of these stories begin with Link's reaction to Midna's departure, so it's refreshing to see things from the latter's perspective (especially right off the bat). I still haven't read beyond the first few chapters, but I absolutely love how you're "setting the stage."

Guys, read this. It's kind of awesome.

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I just spent the last hour.5 reading your story, and, apart from grammar errors, it's absoluteley flawless!! I like your approach, layout and style, and how they don't clash with each other. Where's Maetheus and LLM? They should come read this too! :D

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WhyYouNoReal wrote:
apart from grammar errors
*gasp* Oh no! Grammar errors? D: *goes to the corner and cries* Where? I don't remember reading any... (And this, is why I should get a beta reader or something -.-)

I was joking about the crying bit, by the way. But I will probably be going crazy looking for my errors now D:

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Post Re: The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess - The Return
It's nothing too major. You may have skipped a word here and there, or used the wrong spelling. It didn't hinder me from understanding it though. No worries. :D

For example: "lead" and "led"

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WhyYouNoReal wrote:
For example: "lead" and "led"
Oh, that sort of thing. Yeah, I noticed I did that while typing one of the later chapters. I'll edit it one day... *waves hand dismissively*
Anyhow, I have another chapter to add :D
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Sorry, I don't think this chapter is particularly great... :/

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Seems like this "Blake-Hero of Tyme" guy is really hooked on your story. He is like 90% of the comments :lol:

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Post Re: The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess - The Return
I haven't written a new chapter yet, but I've been working on a drawing... Like concept art for my fanfiction. It's not finished, and I'm in two minds whether to finish it anyway. I thought I'd get some other opinions first. Of course, Zelda's sash, skirt and armour need to be finished and Midna's hand needs a touch up before inking, but the inking so har has been a bit of a half hearted effort really - there's a lot to still be done. Black clouds will be added to the top of the twilight, and the title will probably be written across the bottom... if I finish it. Also, I was wondering whether to outline Link at all. What do you think, leave it un inked, ink it grey or just ink it black?
http://lightworldmidna.deviantart.com/a ... -309183919
I'll start writing the next chapter now, it'll be up tonight or tomorrow or something...

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